Team Home Run: At the Bottom of the Ocean

[onceakoala]

TEAM: Team Home Run
MEMBERS: Tea onceakoala, Ria anguishofmylove, Nox nox_pff
RATING: G

TITLE: At the Bottom of the Ocean
SERIES: Ookiku Furikabutte (oofuri)
MAIN SHIP: Abe Takaya/Mihashi Ren
SIDE PAIRINGS: none
CHARACTERS: Mihashi Ren, Abe Takaya, Momoe Maria, Tajima Yuuichirou, Kanou Shugo, Sakaeguchi Yuuto
MAJOR TAGS: None
ADDITIONAL TAGS: physical transformation, mermaid au, one character briefly has trouble breathing

SUMMARY: Mihashi Ren lives at the bottom of the ocean. He may be an outcast, but he'd never considered living anywhere else... until he meets a boy.


WORK LENGTH: 5453 words, 9 images
SCRIPT: google doc script
NOTES: enjoy some merms

read our entry on the website here!

Comments

COMMENT : TEAM STARMATES

[hibari1_chan]

I AM CRYING THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL :sob::sob::sob:

I love the ending and the art is so soft !!! My babies look so happy !!!
I'm not gonna lie when Abe gave the glove to put under water I was like how dare you litter the ocean XD It was so sad when Ren was looking around like I'm never gonna see my friends again I was like I'm not gonna cry and then you MURDERED ME WITH THAT ENDING

Very good job, I loved this so much thank you <3<3<3

COMMENT: Team Seijoh Third Years

[tsukisyama]

The website for this was super interactive! I really liked your tone throughout each of the writing pieces, and the art was so cute!! Thank you so much for sharing :)

COMMENT: Team Seijoh Third Years

[kuramochis]

Weebly was a really great idea for a platform for this!! I loved seeing each of the different character designs, especially Tajima and Abe. Your art style is so cute, each of the characters are so expressive! And the writing was amazing as well!

COMMENT: TEAM SEIJOH THIRD YEARS

[blackjackals]

I enjoyed the progression of the story a lot, I particularly liked the ending and how it was in second person. Your art style is great; I, too, enjoyed the expressiveness of each character. I got a good sense of each character's personality despite not actually watching Oofuri. Thank you for your hard work!

Comment: Team Seijoh Third Years

[haijikiyose]

Hello hello!! I had a great time reading all of this - each of you are really skilled at writing, art, and website creating respectively! :) I found each sentence compelling - especially at the beginning! I got sucked in really easily, and the art/ease of website navigation was the icing on the cake!! I really appreciate your sharing this!

Comment: Team Setter Squad

[lilija_yuuzel]

This was amazing!
The website is very aesthetically pleasing. The writing was very beautiful and the art was amazing as well! I love the backgrounds and the coloring in all of them, and the tail designs look nice as well!
I actually really expected Mihashi to become human, but the ending was really good and made a lot of sense. It made me think back to the scene when Mihashi was looking around and thinking about how much of the ocean he hasn't explored yet.
A lovely entry! Thank you so much for sharing!