Team Home Run: At the Bottom of the Ocean

[kayzowl]

TEAM: Team Home Run
MEMBERS: Tea kayzowl, Ria anguishofmylove, Nox nox_pff
RATING: G

TITLE: At the Bottom of the Ocean
SERIES: Ookiku Furikabutte (oofuri)
MAIN SHIP: Abe Takaya/Mihashi Ren
SIDE PAIRINGS: none
CHARACTERS: Mihashi Ren, Abe Takaya, Momoe Maria, Tajima Yuuichirou, Kanou Shugo, Sakaeguchi Yuuto
MAJOR TAGS: None
ADDITIONAL TAGS: physical transformation, mermaid au, one character briefly has trouble breathing

SUMMARY: Mihashi Ren lives at the bottom of the ocean. He may be an outcast, but he'd never considered living anywhere else... until he meets a boy.


WORK LENGTH: 5453 words, 9 images
SCRIPT: google doc script
NOTES: enjoy some merms

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Comments

COMMENT: TEAM SEIJOH THIRD YEARS

[blackjackals]

I enjoyed the progression of the story a lot, I particularly liked the ending and how it was in second person. Your art style is great; I, too, enjoyed the expressiveness of each character. I got a good sense of each character's personality despite not actually watching Oofuri. Thank you for your hard work!